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Desolate Setting

Bashful in the sky, The sun hides behind the clouds; Rays in solitude.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 2:54:00 PM
very sweet!! I like it! Light & Love
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Date: 5/5/2009 12:51:00 PM
You bring a different side to haiku, very creative and intelligent pieces. Tyler
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Date: 5/5/2009 11:35:00 AM
This is an elegant Haiku. You have shown great talents in Haikus. Thanks for your godd wishes for my poem the Domain of Pain. - Mohammad
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Date: 5/5/2009 10:25:00 AM
Very soulful write Raul.Thank you for your comments on my blog today Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/5/2009 8:38:00 AM
I truly love your look at nature...the eyes of a master artist!! wonderful once again...on a day that we are hoping that the rays come out of hiding!!
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Date: 5/5/2009 8:01:00 AM
Raul ... visionary and powerful ... an ecstatic photograph in words. Good write.
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Date: 5/5/2009 6:22:00 AM
Still, being optimistic, I can sense those rays will appear any minute. Nice work! Love, Shar
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