Desolate Setting

Bashful in the sky,
The sun hides behind the clouds;
Rays in solitude.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:54 PM
very sweet!! I like it! Light & Love
Martin Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 12:51 PM
You bring a different side to haiku, very creative and intelligent pieces. Tyler
Yamin Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 11:35 AM
This is an elegant Haiku. You have shown great talents in Haikus. Thanks for your godd wishes for my poem the Domain of Pain. - Mohammad
Strand Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 10:25 AM
Very soulful write Raul.Thank you for your comments on my blog today Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 8:38 AM
I truly love your look at nature...the eyes of a master artist!! wonderful once again...on a day that we are hoping that the rays come out of hiding!!
Shango Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 8:01 AM
Raul ... visionary and powerful ... an ecstatic photograph in words. Good write.
Winter Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 6:22 AM
Still, being optimistic, I can sense those rays will appear any minute. Nice work! Love, Shar
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