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Desolate But Hopeful

Have you ever been in your room yet loneliness creeps in it's as if your heart goes boom where your chest has been There are people here with me but that doesn't seem to matter its emptiness feels no glee it still proceeds pidder padder I hope this doesn't find anyone feeling this way when your heart begins to bind it's your soul that will pay I look on the brighter horizons by the light of Luna while the sky fills with diamonds I'll be restored by Gula

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Date: 11/19/2020 2:29:00 PM
You are not the only one to feel like that, Angela. We all have our sad or lonely moments! The good thing is that they don't last! ~ Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/19/2020 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 10/30/2020 7:54:00 AM
- To feel emptiness and no joy ... so sad ... a heartbreaking poem ... but, never lose dreams and hopes, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/30/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs back :)
Date: 10/30/2020 5:24:00 AM
I think loneliness can creep in anywhere, even some people who have so many friends and people around them.. You have a great spirit and that is great.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/30/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One...
Date: 10/30/2020 5:23:00 AM
Meditative pause is always a good thing--and a good time to seek solace from nature--well written, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/30/2020 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I always appreciate you reading my poetry. Have a great weekend
Date: 10/30/2020 3:08:00 AM
I'm lonely anywhere I am in my large useless house. Lovely thoughts though. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/30/2020 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Hang in there, my friend. Hope you have a great weekend :)
Date: 10/29/2020 11:32:00 PM
Beautiful poem Angela! ~Lili
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/30/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, Lillian