Desires

spider web sparkling
caught insects struggling for life~
human ambitions

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Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 5:10 PM
Interesting haiku to interpret, as 'human ambitions' can be good, but they can also be bad. Nicely penned, Rama! :) gw
Balasubramanian Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 3:06 AM
Desires trouble us mentally until fulfilled, we struggle to fulfill them. That's what I wanted to say. Weather good or bad, peace is gone. Thanks for reading and commenting. Enjoy your day friend. Take care, Rama
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 5:16 AM
Great haiku!
Balasubramanian Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 5:30 AM
Thanks Kim that makes my day. Take care, Rama
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