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Desires

spider web sparkling caught insects struggling for life~ human ambitions Syllable checked at poetry soup syllabus counter

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/16/2020 5:10:00 PM

Interesting haiku to interpret, as 'human ambitions' can be good, but they can also be bad. Nicely penned, Rama! :) gw

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/17/2020 3:06:00 AM

Desires trouble us mentally until fulfilled, we struggle to fulfill them. That's what I wanted to say. Weather good or bad, peace is gone. Thanks for reading and commenting. Enjoy your day friend. Take care, Rama

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/15/2020 5:16:00 AM

Great haiku!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/15/2020 5:30:00 AM

Thanks Kim that makes my day. Take care, Rama