Desires

see things ill obtained

to satisfy heart desires ...

feel heart grow diseased





... CayCay
July 13, 2019

betrayalbullyingbusinesscharactercorruptionsenryu

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Paul Callus

July 17, 2019 at 2:00 PM

You gain on one side and lose on the other...can't dance with angels and devils at the same time:) ~ Congratulations on your fine win, CayCay.

Gershon Wolf

July 16, 2019 at 6:55 PM

Oooh. I think that this was well-done, and am also surprised it was a bit far down on the winner's list,...but taste is very personal, of course, and as Gertrude Stein said, or forgot to say: "A win is a win is a win!" Best wishes, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

July 16, 2019 at 5:54 PM

I really like yours, Caycay. I see we placed down by the bottom but at least we are on the list. Congrats! It was a difficult topic to write a senryu for. This is a list i will be checking out when i have time.