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Desires

see things ill obtained to satisfy heart desires ... feel heart grow diseased
... CayCay July 13, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Paul Callus
Date: 7/17/2019 2:00:00 PM
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You gain on one side and lose on the other...can't dance with angels and devils at the same time:) ~ Congratulations on your fine win, CayCay.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/16/2019 6:55:00 PM
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Oooh. I think that this was well-done, and am also surprised it was a bit far down on the winner's list,...but taste is very personal, of course, and as Gertrude Stein said, or forgot to say: "A win is a win is a win!" Best wishes, Gershon
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/16/2019 5:54:00 PM
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I really like yours, Caycay. I see we placed down by the bottom but at least we are on the list. Congrats! It was a difficult topic to write a senryu for. This is a list i will be checking out when i have time.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/16/2019 8:57:00 AM
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This should be on all walls around the world... Well done
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/16/2019 12:24:00 AM
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Wow, powerful words. Congrats on your winning placement.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 7/15/2019 7:34:00 PM
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Hi Cay Cay, Greed can do just that. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/15/2019 7:05:00 PM
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CayCay, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever senryu!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/13/2019 10:59:00 PM
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CayCay, this could have been for all three of these prompts. I think this one will be in the winner's circle for sure!
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