Desire Versus Aversion

I am not a heartless statue made of stone, nor a marble sculpture that's never known the sweet savor of a kiss upon parted lips nor the sensual tracings of one's fingertips. I'm not averse to desires for which I yearn or to the ways to achieve them all in turn. It's happiness I seek throughout this life, not depriving myself with sadness and strife. Desire is usually linked to sexual pleasure, but I aspire to acquire beyond all measure such mundane things, like a juicy red apple without having to beg, borrow, or grapple. It's not greedy to want my desires fulfilled or instead of hot coffee, to prefer it chilled. I'm much happier having a positive thought than suffering the aversion of a broken heart. I cannot condone feelings of dislike or hate but I'm averse to things that I must berate... death, war, and looking down upon others. I'd nullify all of them if I had my druthers. Antipathy can be detrimental to many desires. It's water dousing the flames of my wildfires. I prefer to follow a path of my own choosing, one in which I'll find life much more amusing. As long as my desires are kept under control no one would dare label me 'villain' or 'troll.' I cannot act on impulse, so no one is harmed. From selfish greed, my mind will be disarmed. October 5th, 2022 ~ Desire and Aversion Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 10/6/2022 11:42:00 AM
A poem I could never write Jenna, I haven’t got the self control you possess, yes I enjoy the simple things in life, but have a penchant for the material and some guilty pleasures, but all said once we’re happy and content with life without hurting others or ourselves, it’s our prerogative to choose our own path, excellent writing, all the best for contest, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/7/2022 8:30:00 AM
I am always grateful when I see your complimentary reviews, David. Your assessments are deeply rewarding.
Date: 10/6/2022 9:19:00 AM
Sizzle+...you get better with every piece. Winner winner chicken dinner. :o)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/7/2022 8:29:00 AM
How nice a compliment you've left for me! Thank you, Arlo.
Date: 10/6/2022 9:13:00 AM
Wow, well done, my friend. Exceptionally well done. I especially liked "I prefer to follow a path of my own choosing." I love the way you personalized your poem, but it had a general feeling (if you know what I mean). Good stuff. Good luck in the contest. Soup Mail
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/7/2022 8:29:00 AM
Hi Milt. I do know what you mean. These are my thoughts, but they could just as well belong to anyone. Thanks for your ever-present support.
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