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Desire the jinx

Desire, the jinx, be watchful, heart Double-check each impulse Path is simple, add love to cart Feel within bliss beat’s pulse Softening attention Follow love’s suggestion Release our mind’s tension We fall, we sink Desire, the jinx

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Silent One

Date: 12/27/2023 5:54:00 AM

True words my friend, hopefully people can stop desiring things that jinx.... Your poem rhymes very well..

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/27/2023 4:54:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/27/2023 4:53:00 AM

ooo, I like this one...especially 'Double-check each impulse...' inspirational! have a pleasant day, Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/27/2023 5:49:00 AM

Standard Buddhist mindfulness practice

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/27/2023 3:37:00 AM

Poetry form ~ Quietus

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/27/2023 12:32:00 AM

"We fall, we sink Desire, the jinx" - Natural human nature. Beautiful writing.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/27/2023 3:14:00 AM

Thank you Chris, hope you are doing well