Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

Desire the jinx

Desire, the jinx, be watchful, heart
Double-check each impulse
Path is simple, add love to cart
Feel within bliss beat’s pulse

Softening attention
Follow love’s suggestion
Release our mind’s tension

We fall, we sink
Desire, the jinx

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Silent One December 27, 2023 at 5:54 AM True words my friend, hopefully people can stop desiring things that jinx.... Your poem rhymes very well.. Unseeking Seeker December 27, 2023 at 4:54 PM Thank you! :)

Unseeking Seeker December 27, 2023 at 3:37 AM Poetry form ~ Quietus

Christuraj Alex December 27, 2023 at 12:32 AM "We fall, we sink Desire, the jinx" - Natural human nature. Beautiful writing. Unseeking Seeker December 27, 2023 at 3:14 AM Thank you Chris, hope you are doing well