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I was eagerly searching for an affection that i could cherish Make all the days of my life full of passion The flame and taste of this nature Could not stop me from yearning from your inner soul But unfortunately i was tender and could not taste well your love As i struggled to attempt i really felt bamboozled The bloom of my action seemed an abomination So i ended up dejected hopeless and felt scorned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 11/9/2013 2:21:00 AM
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Date: 12/7/2012 12:53:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Jacob. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/5/2012 3:46:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, you'll find a friendly group of folks here! One heck of an entry write there. Please do enter my contests, direction are in my blog. Light & Love
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