Desire

If I could only write like you Beautiful and profound Perfectly penned words Skilled, inspirational, spellbound Poetry so captivating Transports a mind To other times and places Abandoning reality behind Evoking emotions Opening eyes for the first time Touching hearts and minds A gift significant and sublime

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/6/2022 4:44:00 AM

Good Morning Deb. Hi. Allow me to say you have met your desire. Your words and thought are why we write and share. This is truly lovely. For those who do not read what a dark world they must be living in. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. Yes, poetry is all that you say and all that we aspire to.

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 9/21/2022 5:50:00 PM

Hi Deb :-) You described how I feel about my own poems. So many here write poems that are skillfully penned with amazing words. Your poems are lovely and heart felt. Most of my poems are basic lol... I wish I had this skill you described in your poem. Your "Desire" is beautifully written and straight from the heart. Love it and it's a fave for me! Cheers dear friend :-)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/18/2022 11:32:00 AM

Ah, but you write better than I do, so be happy and continue to excel! Aloha!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/18/2022 8:14:00 AM

Your Poetry is special and they are reflective of you. The diversity is great and it is great in each writer's special way of contributing. I love your poetry.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/18/2022 7:16:00 AM

You express yourself eloquently, Deb. As is the case for this poem. Enjoy your gift of words--uniquely you.