Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Deserving a Kiss

deserving a kiss
                                             surely mind becomes upset 
                                             when one's cool heart miss 

                                                  gummy kiss of wife
                                         so sweet and so nice that warms
                                                 invites deep sleeping

                                                 Kiss's always of love
                                           hides in for loved one's pain
                                                   it's a kind of bliss

                                                   Dirty feeler's kiss
                                                may be anybody else
                                                   better it's to miss   


"A Kiss is just a kiss" Poetry contest

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Shadow Hamilton August 12, 2013 at 4:06 PM lovely BL the sensuality flows out Shadow x smiles Bl Devnath August 14, 2013 at 12:11 PM Thanks a lot, loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A August 11, 2013 at 1:14 PM love them all BL., mostly i enjoyed the last one... dirty feelers... :-) always~ Linda Bl Devnath August 12, 2013 at 9:51 AM Thanks........, for your nice comment. Loved always, bl

Lucilla Carrillo August 8, 2013 at 4:52 PM A kiss is sometimes all it takes and sometimes it can cause a problem. It all depends how it's done. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla Bl Devnath August 10, 2013 at 10:21 AM A lot of thanks to you my friend for your comment. Sorry for late. am busy now a days and hardly find time. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman August 2, 2013 at 2:19 PM i truly am a student of your wonderful poetry Bl Devnath August 3, 2013 at 1:29 PM Hi! my sweet friend, you are always my master. Ha ha...., loved your inspiration. Always, bl

Nette Onclaud July 30, 2013 at 10:54 AM ohhhh, the many laguages of a kiss done in a most unique way... well, well, i like the gummy one best, bl.. terrific!..) huggs Bl Devnath July 30, 2013 at 10:15 PM Many thanks for your nice comment. Loved always, bl.

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2013 at 12:30 AM I really liked that last one. Yes, it's better to miss that one!! Bl Devnath July 26, 2013 at 9:09 AM Thanks a lot for your comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 3:29 PM - Your "suggestion" is a good choice! - Good luck in the contest my friend bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath July 25, 2013 at 4:42 PM Many thanks for your comment and for wishing me good luck. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick July 25, 2013 at 10:35 AM Interesting way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit..Sara Bl Devnath July 25, 2013 at 11:14 AM A lot of thanks from my heart, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl