Desertflower

A flower blossoms in the wild
A blooming flower indeed
Glory amid drying leaves

Flowers that zenith
In expanse of disillusionment
Where motivation sprouts and blossoms
Into lonely desert flowers
Standing together alone
In long wait for love.>
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 9:41 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. The readers her are very responsive. I think you will enjoy it here. I really enjoyed your first post. It seems metaphoric which I love! ; )
Ball Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Nicely done. A seven from me. The desert truly is a beautiful place if we know where to look. God Bless, JB
Vincent Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 2:06 PM
Though it may look dry there is always something growing in the desert..... thanks Judy.
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May 8, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Messoh,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Vincent Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Linda,I have greatly enjoyed reading some of your poems.... infact I am following your link and still reading more of your lovely poems.I hope you don't mind
Vincent Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 5:21 AM
Extremely glad to have known you and I will be proud to read your poems too
Dalei Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Messoh, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
Vincent Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 5:17 AM
Thanks for your great wishes and am glad to have found friends like you.
Flower Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 6:37 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Messoh. :)
A  Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:45 AM
by the way thIS has awesome imagerY. skat
Vincent Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:26 AM
Thanks a lot my dear.
A  Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:45 AM
MeSSOh V, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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