Deserted

Her children are still at rest .
through the frosty window beholds the mother
the feeble rays of the waning sun.
Taken aback by the hovering clouds
as her daily chores remain undone.
Yet another day of futility
Equations lack parity
and remorse fills the rift
a life with bargained voices
constantly feeds the flesh
and insanity veils  the wounds.
This gaol seems a heaven now
and all the sinister chores rejoice within
the door is locked and once again it
resounds with the same nocturnal hymn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Bishnu. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 4:21 AM
Well expressed thoughts well penned, bishnu
Nutter Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 3:18 AM
Excellent piece, the poem reads as if it were a song. Bringing beautiful melodies to the ear.
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