Desert Wanderer

Desert Wanderer with not a cup-
I'll hold you tight and lift you up-

I'll give you aid and lend my strength-
And take you far, to a great length-

To see your safety and a healthy smile-
You are worth life, have no self- denial-

I promised you in, a time now gone past-
That my love forever, surely shall last-

For you are my Desert Wanderer dreary-
Take this sorrow and be your eyes so teary-

I promise you now, and in the here after-
You will find love, placed inside my laughter-

We will stay one, toghether and all-
Always shall I be waiting for your call-

My Desert Wanderer with not a cup-
Hold my hand, I will lift you up-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/24/2012 3:42:00 PM
You do the form very well! Light & Love
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:51:00 PM
I like the meaning in this piece.
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 10/23/2012 9:04:00 PM
Thank you so much! I hope others do as well!
Date: 10/23/2012 10:25:00 AM
Such a touching call to action and love.
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 10/23/2012 9:04:00 PM
Thank you! It mean alot, ever single comment
Date: 10/13/2012 11:47:00 AM
A poem I like very much. - Have a lovely weekend Jordan. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 10/23/2012 9:03:00 PM
I did, I hope you did as well my friend Anne!
Date: 10/10/2012 7:35:00 AM
It read like a anthem, upbeat and all My Desert Wanderer with not a cup hold my hands i will lift you up profound
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 10/23/2012 9:03:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your insight, it is much appreciated!
Date: 10/9/2012 4:17:00 PM
A heartfelt promise artfully tendered. Nice, free-flowing couplets. Enjoyed your poem!
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 10/9/2012 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Stephen! I am very glad that you enjoyed it!
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