Desert Rose

Pale crimson skies
Stretched beyond repair. 
Clouds as scarce as life
Above the desert’s lair. 

Upon the sarcous traces
Of the dusty morsels, 
Rain from a wispy heart
Like drunken yodels.

From the parched sands,
Palatable scents diffuse. 
It approaches, it taunts
The flesh cannot refuse.

The dead wind in its lullaby
Whispers vigorously to give in
The parched eagle shrieks
The rose is bloody from sin. 

Remember the thorny cacti 
Scorched by the wrath
Defence is no defense 
Pain lies on that path. 

The giver of verve
Gives not but mercy.
Famine fuels the force 
The desert is testy. 

The tunnels beneath the sand
Lead to worlds unknown
The edifice in the distance
Could it be a tombstone?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations on your win deepanshi in Syed Amaan Ahmad's contest "Free Style". Love, Carol
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October 3, 2010 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win, Deepanshi
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June 9, 2010 at 9:12 PM
Dry like a sip of the finest vermouth. Really a hot piece. -Alan
Iyer Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Too Good. No doubt it was selected. Best Wishes and Congratulations
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Deepanshi. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 3, 2010 at 1:05 PM
thank you Janette and Carol. I truly appreciate your well wishes...!
Fisher Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 9:34 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece, rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 4:28 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Deepanshi. Love,Carol
Das Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 3:06 AM
wonderful. my best so far. carry on...and am waitin for more...........
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 4:27 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Deepanshi. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Alluring write that got my attention and help on. Good rhyme and rhythm. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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