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Desert Memory



Wildebeest, zebra, and gazelle,
      Such a wonderful sight to see.
         Lions, hippos, and elephants;
            Like tiny toys appeared to me.

Above the desert, 'neath blue sky,
      My memory recalls the flights,
         Aloft in those hot air balloons,
             Thrilled by the Serengeti sights.


December 8, 2015

~4th Place~
Contest: Old or New, 8 line MAX
Sponsor: Rick Parise
Judged: 10/08/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Scars Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 9:46 PM
oh I love this! I love watching animals running in the wind....congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
Delaney Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 11:42 PM
This a fun poem. I like the formatting of the stanzas, They look like horizontal clouds, Hugs, SuZ
Woods    Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 7:07 PM
How inspiring. I would give my eye teeth to do something like this. Another thing to add to my bucket list.
Haight Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Hi Mark, thank you for visiting my poem. Don't be too jealous...I have not done this either! I have been up in a hot air balloon, but not in Africa. It was a fantasy write for me supposedly for a contest. But, so happy you liked it! Sandra
Dutt Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Cool write ,all d best for contest :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 8:48 AM
this is so cool how you did the challenge. I really like it , Sandra.
Haight Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Not so cool, Andrea...the word to use was 'dessert' not 'desert'! I removed it from the contest!! I must need better glasses! :(
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