Desert Life

Desert pool shimmers/
   Drinking water from cupped hands
   Cool sweetness of life


5Mar14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ramos  Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 12:28 AM
love your haiku rick , it is making me thirsty
Richardson Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Thanks, Gregory.
Berdoo Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 5:33 PM
Wow! Broke down on Route 66 in the Califonia,E summer sun; brings truth to this haiku poem. Thanks, Rick
Richardson Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Thank you, Larry!
Callus Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 2:21 PM
very good haiku. cupped hands holding the essence of life...don't waste a drop. // paul
Richardson Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Thanks much, Paul.
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