Sara Kendrick Poet Diamante

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Sometimes our lives or writing is like a desert then again it is like a plush stream...

Desert Becomes Water

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                                                   Desert
                                     powdery             waterless
                                   withering   drying  unrefreshing
                                  aridness    thirst      rain    spring
                                  living         bubbling     refreshing
                                          deep             well
                                                   water

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Joe Maverick December 2, 2011 at 9:43 AM Well Sara, this reminds me that there can be sustenance in the most unlikley situations..! worth thinking on yours Joe:)

Phyllis Babcock December 1, 2011 at 10:58 AM I like the way this goes from dry to wet Sara. I looked at the form and then decided it was to much thinking at the moment. Ryan has his nose surgery today so did not sleep last night. He is a heavy smoker and also asthmatic and tons of allergies. love phyl

Doris Culverhouse November 29, 2011 at 8:35 PM made me thirsty!! how are you lately? hope you are good. could you pick caleb up at school at 3pm on Thursday?

Journey Mcknight November 29, 2011 at 9:57 AM very well descriptive , I like it alot. well put together, how much time did it take ya? Missed reading you so I dropped by. Cindy (Lifes a journey....)

Richard Pickett November 29, 2011 at 9:28 AM Nice Sara, well done. God Bless...Taz

Daver Austin November 28, 2011 at 3:07 PM Interesting use of this form, Sara. A true oasis of a poem. Love, daver

Jack Horne November 28, 2011 at 9:11 AM Lovely diamante, my friend. I loved the vivid descriptions you used

Nathan D. November 27, 2011 at 11:03 PM love it Sara'

Russell Sivey November 27, 2011 at 9:45 PM Very nice Diamante, I thought it to be very effective in conveying just what you wanted to say! Starts off perfectly heading towards that coveted water and finally sees this water! It got what it wanted! Great work!!

Bl Devnath November 27, 2011 at 8:51 PM Beautiful write of comparison. Best of luck for contest. bl

Kim Merryman November 27, 2011 at 3:24 PM Nice contrast, Sara. Best wishes in the contest. Kim