Descent of grace

waking up in the wee hours of the night
magnetised form charged with divine light
third eye glistened, pulsated and whirred
root at base of spinal column concurred 
liquified energy flowed in third eye and spine
in childlike trust our presence chose to align
energisation done we felt a tap on our head
grace descended of which naught can be said
a subtle yet firm energy descent in a swift sweep
from head to toe permeating each cell within deep

or simply stated, to be touched by God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Dear US, your poem beautifully captures a spiritual experience with eloquent simplicity. Your poetic words evoke the sensation of divine connection and the transformative power of grace. The imagery of energy flowing and the subtle yet palpable descent of grace is deeply felt. Thank you for sharing this transcendent moment. Your artistic poem reminds us of the divine's awe-inspiring presence in our lives. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
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March 7, 2024 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Daniel. Take it as literal, not metaphorical.
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