Descending Sun

Descending Sun




Setting sun indoctrinates an ascent,
Even smallest ants can cast,
Obvious long shadows !






Kimo - 10/7/6
Written Jan 19th, 2015
For contest by Scott thirtyseven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Excellent...good luck in the contests.
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
you were very clever to incorporate those words in kimo. Good one.
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 1:46 AM
Very nice pen Dr. Upma! Much enjoyed your kimo my very dear friend. Best to you in the contest! Have a good day! :) Live and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^
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