Descending Grace Haiku

as the seasons change

a leaf drifts to mother earth

beautiful in death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 29, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Margret... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
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April 23, 2010 at 7:05 PM
"Beauty in death"...wonderful insight, Maggie...And thanks, again for your kind comments on my poem, always..Love, Audrey
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April 23, 2010 at 6:27 PM
Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest,Margaret. Agape, Moses
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April 23, 2010 at 12:18 PM
So much truth in your words. Nice perspective on the picture. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Another success for you to enjoy. Keep on writing. Karen
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April 23, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Margaret. Love, Carol
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April 23, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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April 22, 2010 at 11:34 PM
Congratulations on your win, Margaret!
Mehta Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 11:29 PM
Nicely expressed with fine images
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April 22, 2010 at 11:18 PM
Margaret, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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April 22, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Indeed....beautiful is the right word !!!
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April 22, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Beautiful!
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April 22, 2010 at 7:02 PM
love it, good luck! :) ------Ell
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April 22, 2010 at 6:58 PM
It is truly graceful the way a leaf drifts gently to earth. Lovely sense of tranquility and acceptance of death in this poem, Margaret. You have mastered the haiku form and I wish you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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April 22, 2010 at 6:57 PM
Margaret~ A wonderful entry best wishes in the contest! Laura :)
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