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Descendants of Abraham, Isaac, and Jacob

missed whips of Egypt
missed share of bread and  water—
stillborn golden calf

9/29/2021

*Perhaps you’ll read the companion poem THEY WERE NOT GROWN

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/1/2021 12:19:00 PM Ooh love the last line especially. Wait. I loved ALL of the lines. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/1/2021 2:43:00 PM <3

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/30/2021 3:59:00 AM How far away from days of old, there is still so much to learn, for past disclosures, nicely written Kim, have a great day ;) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/30/2021 4:18:00 AM Thank you, Mystic Rose!

Brian Strand Date: 9/30/2021 1:10:00 AM Long storu Kim encapsulate in a short hiku!! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/30/2021 4:17:00 AM Thank you, Brian :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/29/2021 11:04:00 PM Sometimes I wonder how stupid those followers of Moses were. Hugs. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/30/2021 4:17:00 AM Enough so that a generation had to pass before they were ready to enter the promised land. The Egyptian way had to pass.

Harry Horsman Date: 9/29/2021 7:48:00 PM There is the right path, and the wrong path. The message is clear. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/29/2021 8:06:00 PM Thank you, Harry!