Descendants of Abraham, Isaac, and Jacob

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missed whips of Egypt missed share of bread and water— stillborn golden calf 9/29/2021 *Perhaps you’ll read the companion poem THEY WERE NOT GROWN

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Date: 10/1/2021 12:19:00 PM

Ooh love the last line especially. Wait. I loved ALL of the lines.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2021 2:43:00 PM

Date: 9/30/2021 3:59:00 AM

How far away from days of old, there is still so much to learn, for past disclosures, nicely written Kim, have a great day ;)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2021 4:18:00 AM

Thank you, Mystic Rose!

Date: 9/30/2021 1:10:00 AM

Long storu Kim encapsulate in a short hiku!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2021 4:17:00 AM

Thank you, Brian :)

Date: 9/29/2021 11:04:00 PM

Sometimes I wonder how stupid those followers of Moses were. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2021 4:17:00 AM

Enough so that a generation had to pass before they were ready to enter the promised land. The Egyptian way had to pass.

Date: 9/29/2021 7:48:00 PM

There is the right path, and the wrong path. The message is clear.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2021 8:06:00 PM

Thank you, Harry!