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Descendants of Abraham, Isaac, and Jacob



missed whips of Egypt
missed share of bread and  water—
stillborn golden calf

9/29/2021

*Perhaps you’ll read the companion poem THEY WERE NOT GROWN

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

October 1, 2021 at 12:19 PM

Ooh love the last line especially. Wait. I loved ALL of the lines.

October 1, 2021 at 2:43 PM

<3

Mystic Rose Rose

September 30, 2021 at 3:59 AM

How far away from days of old, there is still so much to learn, for past disclosures, nicely written Kim, have a great day ;)

September 30, 2021 at 4:18 AM

Thank you, Mystic Rose!

September 30, 2021 at 1:10 AM

Long storu Kim encapsulate in a short hiku!!

September 30, 2021 at 4:17 AM

Thank you, Brian :)

Victor Buhagiar

September 29, 2021 at 11:04 PM

Sometimes I wonder how stupid those followers of Moses were. Hugs.

September 30, 2021 at 4:17 AM

Enough so that a generation had to pass before they were ready to enter the promised land. The Egyptian way had to pass.

September 29, 2021 at 7:48 PM

There is the right path, and the wrong path. The message is clear.

September 29, 2021 at 8:06 PM

Thank you, Harry!

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