Derivation

The sun,
The Exodus:
And I awaken
Trust us, Lord
Eyes are shaken – 

Measure of tongue,
Abide thy son:
Trodden with,
Forever young.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 20, 2009 at 4:23 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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August 20, 2009 at 3:32 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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