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My brain was in collusion With psychosis and illusion, No fragment of resolution In my sinkhole of confusion, Any leverage or bevel Leads me towards the devil, Now derelict of hope, I seek sanctuary to cope. Entry for Eight Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann 4/6/2019

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Date: 7/6/2019 11:12:00 PM
You’ve woven the required words with seamless ease into the compelling fabric of your poem, Gary. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/7/2019 5:12:00 AM
Thank you Susan. :)
Date: 7/2/2019 4:49:00 PM
Bravio, Gary. An awesome poem with these most challenging words. Bravo. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 7/2/2019 4:54:00 PM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 7/2/2019 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. Sad and yet somehow up-lifting. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 7/2/2019 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Kai. :)
Date: 6/4/2019 3:28:00 PM
Hi Gary: a poem fueled with periled fear. FEARSOMELY DONE!
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Date: 6/4/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Ralph. :)