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Derek Tries To Please

Derek tried to satisfy his mother, so he gave his horse a drink. Then he knit the horse some earmuffs, they were pretty soft and pink. You need to give the horse a lift and a break said his brother. He looks ridiculous carrying that horse, argued Derek’s mother.

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Date: 9/13/2023 8:23:00 PM
What that a real horse or a toy. Doesn’t matter it’s still a cute story. I enjoyed reading.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/14/2023 8:22:00 PM
I was inspired by a photo of a man with a real pony over his shoulders.
Date: 9/13/2023 5:33:00 PM
An imaginative and fun poem Caren. You constantly amaze me.
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Date: 9/13/2023 5:29:00 AM
Great imagination!
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