Derek Tries To Please

Derek tried to satisfy his mother, so he gave his horse a drink.
Then he knit the horse some earmuffs, they were pretty soft and pink.
You need to give the horse a lift and a break said his brother.
He looks ridiculous carrying that horse, argued Derek’s mother.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Roper Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 8:23 PM
What that a real horse or a toy. Doesn’t matter it’s still a cute story. I enjoyed reading.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 8:22 PM
I was inspired by a photo of a man with a real pony over his shoulders.
Brotherton Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:33 PM
An imaginative and fun poem Caren. You constantly amaze me.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:29 AM
Great imagination!
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