Derby Day

The odds are stacked against me
But I’ve picked my favorite horse.
Today is Derby Day and will I watch it?
Yes, of course!

I am not a race fanatic
But for this one in Kentucky,
I select my top 3 choices
And I hope that I get lucky.

My bet and my mint julep
Are imaginary; still,
I scream and cheer my horses on,
A rare live-action thrill.

So here’s to Soup & Sandwich,
Midnight Bourbon, Brooklyn Strong!
Though you’re all long shots, I believe
You’ll prove the experts wrong.

I’ve chosen you to win this – 
That’s despite the tipsters’ claims – 
By a method I’ve perfected – 
I’m attracted to your names!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/4/2021 8:19:00 AM
I love these names too! "So here’s to Soup & Sandwich, Midnight Bourbon, Brooklyn Strong!" Are they fiction or actual race horses?
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/4/2021 12:04:00 PM
Those horses were all in the race, Caren. Soup & Sandwich came in dead last and Brooklyn Strong didn’t do much better. Midnight Bourbon was in the top 10, though...
Date: 5/2/2021 12:31:00 PM
I bet on the Kentucky Derby once, back in the 1950s; they mentioned the horse was out of the gate but have never heard of him since, so perhaps he is still running around ? At least it was a beautiful day! Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/1/2021 1:05:00 PM
From my limited experience, Ilene, that's as good of a way as any. Are you wearing a bonnet, too?
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/1/2021 1:09:00 PM
Ha! I guess I can wear an imaginary one to go with my pretend mint julep! Thanks for stopping by, Daniel...
Date: 5/1/2021 12:20:00 PM
I don't have a clue about horse racing but I too would choose by the names, wishing you good luck with your bets, have a lovely weekend :-)hugs Jan
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/1/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! The bets are just with my husband, so we’ll have a few laughs. Have a great weekend, too...
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