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Depths of Love

Love is a challenge 
At best of times
But if our hearts be true
Love like water will find 
Its true depths in you.

©? Brenda V Northeast   14th January 2012

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Maureen Lefanue

January 22, 2012 at 3:37 PM

Dear Bren, Thanks for yet another of your gracious comments. We have the March flies up here in Noosa, and they have a horse bite even worse than mozzies. Aeroguard to your rescue! Have a great day! God bless you, love, Maureen

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2012 at 7:54 PM

wow, this is DEEP just as the title suggests!! with a few tweaks it could be a tanka poem!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 18, 2012 at 3:52 AM

Thank you Andrea- I am not sure how to do Tanka's any suggestions? : ) Love and blessings, Brenda

Elizabeth Wesley

January 15, 2012 at 8:26 AM

Each line delivers an interesting thought which winds up so beautifully in the last line. Very special Brenda!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 15, 2012 at 8:40 AM

Thank you Elizabeth, kind regards, : )

James Marshall Goff

January 14, 2012 at 11:34 PM

Splendid! Brenda! jimbo

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 15, 2012 at 1:01 AM

Thank you Jimbo you have blessed me again, : )

Vertical Vertical

January 14, 2012 at 9:55 PM

Beautiful! I like to read again and again the last two lines.Very Beautiful.

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 15, 2012 at 1:01 AM

Thank you so much Vertical, I appreciate your visit and kind words, brenda : )

Suzanne C. Goudreau

January 14, 2012 at 7:22 PM

Wow! I've read this one a few times as each time a different meaning came to mind. Very cleverly delivered. Love your penning. This poem delivers a profound message in just a few lines. Excellent read!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 15, 2012 at 1:00 AM

Thank you Suzanne : ) Blessings and love, Brenda