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Depths of Love

Love is a challenge 
At best of times
But if our hearts be true
Love like water will find 
Its true depths in you.

©? Brenda V Northeast   14th January 2012

Copyright © Brenda Victoria Northeast | Year Posted 2012

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Maureen Lefanue Date: 1/22/2012 3:37:00 PM Dear Bren, Thanks for yet another of your gracious comments. We have the March flies up here in Noosa, and they have a horse bite even worse than mozzies. Aeroguard to your rescue! Have a great day! God bless you, love, Maureen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/17/2012 7:54:00 PM wow, this is DEEP just as the title suggests!! with a few tweaks it could be a tanka poem! Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/18/2012 3:52:00 AM Thank you Andrea- I am not sure how to do Tanka's any suggestions? : ) Love and blessings, Brenda

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 1/15/2012 8:26:00 AM Each line delivers an interesting thought which winds up so beautifully in the last line. Very special Brenda! Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/15/2012 8:40:00 AM Thank you Elizabeth, kind regards, : )

James Marshall Goff Date: 1/14/2012 11:34:00 PM Splendid! Brenda! jimbo Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/15/2012 1:01:00 AM Thank you Jimbo you have blessed me again, : )

Vertical Vertical Date: 1/14/2012 9:55:00 PM Beautiful! I like to read again and again the last two lines.Very Beautiful. Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/15/2012 1:01:00 AM Thank you so much Vertical, I appreciate your visit and kind words, brenda : )

Suzanne C. Goudreau Date: 1/14/2012 7:22:00 PM Wow! I've read this one a few times as each time a different meaning came to mind. Very cleverly delivered. Love your penning. This poem delivers a profound message in just a few lines. Excellent read! Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/15/2012 1:00:00 AM Thank you Suzanne : ) Blessings and love, Brenda

Bl Devnath Date: 1/14/2012 2:18:00 PM Rightly said in exceptional style about depths of love. Thanks for visiting my write, bl Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/14/2012 6:06:00 PM Thank you Bi, blessings, Brensda

Dinda Minardi Date: 1/14/2012 6:06:00 AM Awww, meaningful and sweet message you have here, Brenda. Love is powerful, but if you get the rhyme it will kneel before you :) Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/14/2012 7:10:00 AM Thank you Dinda for your kind response, Brenda : )

M.I.A . Date: 1/14/2012 3:21:00 AM wow! so true, simply profound. love it Brenda! Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/14/2012 7:11:00 AM Thank you Mia, love and blessings, Brenda : )

Audrey Haick Date: 1/13/2012 9:35:00 PM This is very lovely and water does seek its level, Brenda. Thanks for the visit and have a great weekend, my poet friend! Love, Annalise Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/14/2012 7:11:00 AM Thank you Annalise, You too : ) Bren