Notes About The Poem

Depths of Anguish

Into the
   depths of anguish;
      plunged deep.

Gone in a flash
   job held dear for years.
      In a daze...

after
   a lay off;
      no fault...

of his own.
   He now finds
      himself at crossroads.

"Where do I go from here?,"
   he...
      morosely wonders.


(Yalto)


"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllabbles
Date written: 02/17/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:29 AM
You gave voice to the anguish many feel. Great to be able to evoke such emotions in a short write--thanks to the form you invented.
Ibeh Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Thank you as always, Vijay:-) Be well and safe out there, my friend!
Mcintosh Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:10 AM
So sad... God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
Ibeh Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 4:16 AM
Thanks for the visit and feedback, Regina:-) Blessings, xoxo
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