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Depression

If I die today...do not cry for me tomorrow...

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Swetha Vangaveti

January 28, 2019 at 2:32 AM

Excellent work of art comes from grief. And this one is touching :)

Maria Williams

June 18, 2017 at 2:53 AM

In such a few words such a powerful message. I really liked your monoku Sunita... Maria

Sunita U.D Palawon

June 18, 2017 at 7:19 AM

Thanks for the appreciation Maria. Honored to have your visit. G. Luck :))

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2017 at 8:52 PM

wow, sunita, this is remarkable monoku. I love it! sorry I can't see longer poems of yours. I have gotten really behind on all the poets who commented to me this week.

Sunita U.D Palawon

June 17, 2017 at 5:43 AM

Thanks Dazzling Andrea for the nice comment. It does not matter I, too have to catch up. Managed to post only three this week. Best of luck for everything!:) Hugs Sunita.

Bl Devnath

June 14, 2017 at 1:59 PM

Sometimes, i do feel like this, but after passing sometime mind gets change and brings a new hope. When this kind of feeling comes, at that time pray God to show a new way. Beautifully said a common feeling of frustration. Loved always my dear lovely friend, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon

June 15, 2017 at 10:18 AM

Thanks for sharing your feelings upon this write my dear friend. True, God very often emanates from inside us to appear in moments of need. Thanks much. :)

Ravi Sathasivam

June 10, 2017 at 12:38 AM

"Depression begins with disappointment. When disappointment festers in our soul, it leads to discouragement". by Joyce Meyer. Be strong my friend. Excellent Momoku. Thanks for sharing it.

Sunita U.D Palawon

June 13, 2017 at 4:30 AM

Agree with you Ravi, but at times these odd feelings open new alleys for thought that we would often ignore. A halt is important at times... Thanks and G luck to you :)