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Depression

If I die today...do not cry for me tomorrow...

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Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/28/2019 2:32:00 AM

Excellent work of art comes from grief. And this one is touching :)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/18/2017 2:53:00 AM

In such a few words such a powerful message. I really liked your monoku Sunita... Maria

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/18/2017 7:19:00 AM

Thanks for the appreciation Maria. Honored to have your visit. G. Luck :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2017 8:52:00 PM

wow, sunita, this is remarkable monoku. I love it! sorry I can't see longer poems of yours. I have gotten really behind on all the poets who commented to me this week.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/17/2017 5:43:00 AM

Thanks Dazzling Andrea for the nice comment. It does not matter I, too have to catch up. Managed to post only three this week. Best of luck for everything!:) Hugs Sunita.

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/14/2017 1:59:00 PM

Sometimes, i do feel like this, but after passing sometime mind gets change and brings a new hope. When this kind of feeling comes, at that time pray God to show a new way. Beautifully said a common feeling of frustration. Loved always my dear lovely friend, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/15/2017 10:18:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your feelings upon this write my dear friend. True, God very often emanates from inside us to appear in moments of need. Thanks much. :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/10/2017 12:38:00 AM

"Depression begins with disappointment. When disappointment festers in our soul, it leads to discouragement". by Joyce Meyer. Be strong my friend. Excellent Momoku. Thanks for sharing it.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/13/2017 4:30:00 AM

Agree with you Ravi, but at times these odd feelings open new alleys for thought that we would often ignore. A halt is important at times... Thanks and G luck to you :)

Sara Ella

Date: 6/4/2017 2:10:00 PM

Hugs to you! <3 This is so well said - so few words and perfect.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/13/2017 4:28:00 AM

I'm glad you read and appreciate. True it just summed up my feelings at that moment...Hugs Sunita.

Roy Pett

Date: 5/30/2017 5:53:00 AM

Depression is only understood by suffers and you have summed up their thinking in this excellent Monoku Sunita,so sad, best wishes Roy.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/4/2017 10:06:00 AM

Thanks Roy. So kind of you to stop by and leave such an understanding comment. I'm glad you like. gluck.:)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2017 11:47:00 AM

I surely hope you don't die today. You would be missed and many tears will fall.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 5/27/2017 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Tim, I'm so touched...this is the fruit of a depressed mind(been down with seasonal fever for days...) Miss you all too.