Depression

D rink from this cup. E scape into darkness. P repare to meet your maker. R egret nothing. E rase all happiness. S ever all ties. S ee only despair. I nvite grim reaper. O rganise affairs. N ighty nite.x

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James Inman

Date: 11/21/2017 3:29:00 AM

Succinct and to the point Jean, nice acrostic.

Jean Murray
Date: 11/21/2017 4:30:00 AM

Thank you James. May I never return to that frame of mind.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/17/2017 8:15:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Jean. Chilling poem.

Jean Murray
Date: 11/17/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Agnes.

Brian Davey

Date: 11/14/2017 4:43:00 PM

A sort of chilling little tale, like suicide notes. Congratulations on your win

Jean Murray
Date: 11/14/2017 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Brian. It was a chilling tale at that time. I was caught between a rope in the shed or driving off a senic route into the sea. I kid you not.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/4/2017 7:47:00 PM

Jean, congratulation on your acrostic, very dark write.. ~`*

Jean Murray
Date: 9/4/2017 8:21:00 PM

Thank you Eve.This came from a very dark place.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2015 5:31:00 PM

Oh such a dark sad acrostic jean:-( hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2015 1:16:00 AM

He now needs 6 monthly blood tests instead of 3 so is doing great . So pleased you are healing too:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 11/9/2015 6:30:00 PM

Thank you again Jan. I have just read your biography. I hope your husband is well again. My marriage broke up 6 years ago. The joy of my escape clashed with the heartbreak of our teenage children. Hence the depression that has since healed.