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Depression

DEPRESSION gray sky full of twigs a late november ugly no snow and no snow a gray sky so low staring up – eyes wide open no snow and no snow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 9:08:00 AM

Good morning, Daver.. this one deep Haiku.. Have a nice day..... -<-@ luv~LINDA <3

Jack Horne

Date: 12/4/2013 2:56:00 PM

lovely write here, Daver - no snow here either

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/2/2013 8:41:00 AM

Daver - I am sorry for your lack of snow but love the twigs in the gray sky. love, Kathy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/21/2013 6:10:00 AM

daver, i must tell you this piece intrgues me as the sullen mood you expressed is beautiful....love the repetition effect.. are you alright or just part of the poetic process?..huggs..:)

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/21/2013 1:15:00 AM

Wow Daver, I see you got really inspired..or is it un-inspired?? L O L..' 'however' should we recieve any white stuff, I shall despatch it off to Texas, with a strict no returns clause..! Hope fhat cheers you up..? Joe.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2013 4:06:00 PM

I love this pair of haiku you wrote, Daver Would the snow actually make you happier?.