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Depression

DEPRESSION

gray sky full of twigs
a late november ugly
no snow    and    no snow


a gray sky so low
staring up – eyes wide open
no snow    and    no snow

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Poet Destroyer A

December 11, 2013 at 9:08 AM

Good morning, Daver.. this one deep Haiku.. Have a nice day..... -<-@ luv~LINDA <3

Jack Horne

December 4, 2013 at 2:56 PM

lovely write here, Daver - no snow here either

Kathryn Collins

December 2, 2013 at 8:41 AM

Daver - I am sorry for your lack of snow but love the twigs in the gray sky. love, Kathy

Nette Onclaud

November 21, 2013 at 6:10 AM

daver, i must tell you this piece intrgues me as the sullen mood you expressed is beautiful....love the repetition effect.. are you alright or just part of the poetic process?..huggs..:)

Joe Maverick

November 21, 2013 at 1:15 AM

Wow Daver, I see you got really inspired..or is it un-inspired?? L O L..' 'however' should we recieve any white stuff, I shall despatch it off to Texas, with a strict no returns clause..! Hope fhat cheers you up..? Joe.