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A mind clouded in darkness A mind full of hopelessness A mind full of despair A mind that is beyond repair A mind full of negative thinking Is like a ship that is sinking Positive thoughts are what I seek For an outlook that seems so bleak

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Date: 1/15/2011 7:32:00 AM
You are on your way with this write - beautifully expressed - Liz
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