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Depression

DEPRESSION Every day is a struggle and I don't care Perhaps I am not alone but always feel that way Relapse happens all to easy and so easy to give in Even my friends pretend to understand and I smile a knowing smile So maybe they are not worth keeping, then I would be alone Sometimes this is how I feel not a good state of mind In my own space I would always like to be Only recently I think with a clear head Never knowing if I am going to have a good or bad day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/31/2010 9:29:00 AM
Acrostics are difficult forms. I'm sure you'd feel freer with free verse.
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Date: 8/31/2010 4:22:00 AM
Hope it is a good day for you...enjoyed reading your work!!
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:17:00 AM
It's hard going through a patch like this - but you seem to be dealing with it! Best wishes, Liz
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:12:00 AM
Depression weighs heavy on the soul, excellent write, very vivid emotions on display.
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:49:00 AM
A nice acrostic with well expressed thoughts, pamela
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