Depression

Depression,

Casting shadows,

Sadness overtaking fast

It threatens to last

Forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 26, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Very deep write,,, it is so that we do at times get over shaddowed by it, enjoyed your write...P.D.
Eakin Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 11:23 AM
theres no such thing as forever
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Very descriptive and expressive of that terrible demon of depression..Hope that it is not your life ...Sara
Slaughter Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Good description of this horrible disease of the mind!
Spence Sr Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 3:17 PM
The essence of this poem is just devastating. There is still a cure on the horizon for those experiencing the pain. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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June 25, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Powerful write.. short and to the point... Michael
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