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Depression

Darkness is
Energy depleting
Penance with no
Residual happiness
Emotional
Serenades
Sifting
Inside
Overcoming
Nothing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 1:20:00 PM
wonderful job!---Ell
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:55:00 AM
You nailed it, Im. This is just what depression feels like. This is one of the powerful acrostics I have seen. Makes me see great merit in this verse form. "Overcoming Nothing" is exactly how depression makes us feel. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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