Departure

The bird flew away 
 branch continued shivering
Parting or farewell?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Michaels Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:06 AM
Very nice Haiku... full of imagery and thought-proving too!
Sangwai Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Glad to know that you liked it : )
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