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Dentist

Nervous in the chair Working on the problem teeth Look at all the pebbles

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Ra R

Date: 12/7/2009 7:22:00 AM

:D Thanks all.... this is another haiku about a dream I had. I am not really fearful of dentists haha. In my dream I was at the dentist, she was working on my teeth and then displayed a tray that had lots of little pebbles. The dentist in the dream happened to be a very good friend of mine (who is not really a dentist). My interpretation of this is that the pebbles represent my worldy and selfish ways/desires. My friend is helping me release these things and rid me of their hold. :D

P P

Date: 12/7/2009 3:54:00 AM

insects of the teeth,avoid the community spoon,

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/5/2009 3:37:00 PM

Find a dentist with beautiful eyes and concentrate on them,,it helps reduce the fear and pain..it works:)Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/5/2009 10:17:00 AM

Yikes, I have always been afraid of dentists so this haiku hit home, Ra! Did you see the "dentist" in the Dustin Hoffman movie "Marathon Man"? I mentioned this to my own dentist once and he looked at me in horror. Perhaps we can figure out a way to torture them as they torture us. (Just kidding, of course.) Great work! Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/5/2009 9:43:00 AM

Nicely done, R Ra! You should see my face as I read this one about Dentists!! Soup Mail! Peace and love, Audrey

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/5/2009 7:07:00 AM

short and beautiful and enjoy your day. :)