Dented Cans

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DENTED CANS Took a bag of trash To the curb inside the bag Garbage, dented cans 1/11/18 Original contest Dented Cans For Contest: 'A STUNNER JANUARY 2018' Contest Info Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/18/2018 3:03:00 AM

Congrats.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2018 7:02:00 PM

James,well done on the haiku and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2018 2:15:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning haiku poem, James :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/17/2018 10:15:00 AM

Clever haiku, James. Well done.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/11/2018 5:46:00 PM

James your poem is clever. I like what you wrote. Have a nice day my friend.