dense mobility

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20.46pm Aug. 12, 2024

dense mobility of learners in chairless room stops at wet market

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Joe Maverick

Date: 8/17/2024 11:34:00 PM

A very fishy plot BJ..' I must say the sponsor Might have 'thought Wuhan?' Whats the plan?? As I did at first..As wondering what sort of Pressure-torture the chairless people were being put through.?? Or was chairless no Point of view allowed?? Oh my I have a Polluted mind now..Damn scoros and schwab' Oh well theres a hot holiday awaiting someone Or two.?? Not that I'm happy Lord.!! Well..Maybe A smidgen.?? Anyway have a great day.)

Len Gasun
Date: 8/23/2024 7:43:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful comment my dear poet friend Joe. By the way, I'm not BJ ha ha ha

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/13/2024 10:26:00 AM

My dear Len, what a provocative senryu that evokes such strong images. Hope all is well. Sending you many blessings, dear friend.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 10:16:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the many blessings too dearest friend. Blesssings back to you and your writings.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 8:41:00 PM

My dear Sam, thank you so much for the uplifting words and most especially your visit. I'm always busy and very busy my dear poet friend. The reason of my on and off on the poetrysoup, but I'm trying to breath by coming here. Still thankful to the soup. This poem is just a try, a riddlelike idea on school of fish. ha ha ha. God bless you always and your writings Hugs

Silent One

Date: 8/12/2024 11:34:00 AM

This is very creative and very clever.. you have a very imaginative mind..

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 8:39:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear poet and friend SO. Just a quite silly idea that sparked on my mind on school of fish. ha ha ha. I enjoyed writing it though the sponsor didn't acknowledge it. Thanks a lot for coming by my dear SO. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/12/2024 10:37:00 AM

What a creative write. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away...........

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 8:33:00 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed reading my senryu on school of fish my dearest poet friend Paula. Quite a silly idea that sparks on my busy mind ha ha ha. Thank you so much. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2024 9:12:00 AM

Interesting work. Learners in chairless room. I am wondering what age. I can imagine if it is any age under 30 what would be going on. Over thirty they probably would be complaining about no place to sit and the older they happen to be the more complaining that would be happening. LOL..Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/17/2024 10:22:00 PM

Oh!! About a school of fish. I guess that must be hard to learn when there are no chairs to park themselves for classes. LOL..Sara K

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 8:31:00 PM

Ha ha ha. I was laughing too. Just quite a silly idea on school of fish. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your delightful comments giving me a bright sunshine this day. Much welcome my dearest friend. I thank you more. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs