Dense

Thank you Lord for night's good cool rain
And the fog of the morn
The coolness in the air; relief
from summer's heat well-worn

The dense fog coats trees, creek, and hill
Dark clouds shroud sky-blue sky
Not a cricket chirps few birds sing
Quiet as mouse sits I

Saturday July 28, 2012  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sivey Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 4:50 PM
I really enjoyed this well put together write of yours Sara! I thoroughly love the fog and how it moves so wispy like, beautiful! And you paint this event so very awesomely my friend! This is a special piece! Great Work!!
Merryman Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Just reading this made me feel cooler! I enjoyed reading your poem, Sara. Love, Kim
Goff Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 7:10 AM
Outstanding Sara! A healing rain is best when one gets wet! I just stood in the rain myself! Warm raindrops roiling the surface of my coffee! BRAVO! jimbo
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