DENIM

TEXTURE OF MINIMALISM: Title - Denim
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: 16-Nov-2025
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Old dirty blues, Lived in and once beloved. All that dirt speaks of time - Stains mark a living hard earned. Faded hand prints, Of the love lost on the way, Dreams of home not to be -- Pocket heavy with pennies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Very good! Congrats!
Somadas Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 8:56 PM
“Pocket heavy with pennies” is a brilliant final detail.. Great win Upasana..
Alex Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 9:26 PM
"Faded hand prints, Of the love lost" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 12:57 PM
Back with congrats. Way to go
Layne Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations! Old dirty blues ... liked that opening.
Godwin Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 9:05 PM
got it, felt it, enjoyed the read - good job!!! CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 12:24 PM
I see you also chose denim. Great imagery for it. Awesome last line
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