Denied Alchemy

readings denied
 so I scratched your name in shale
 alchemy of sand

I am still learning how to write Haiku please be gentle lol
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Stmichael Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Layers of meaning in just a few words...love it.
Street Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 1:40 PM
You Are Awesome Girl! ~ KLove *
Andresen Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 11:59 AM
- A skilled haiku in my eyes, Jayne! - (I am thankfully (!) ... no expert :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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