Denial

Dazed as the phone wire strangled my neck 
End of my youth faded with you 
Noise of my tears echoes neighbouring walls 
Innocent dreams dimmed in stardust so prematurely 
And still every day I ask the sky why you are a star
Lost in the solar system without a glittering goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 6:41 AM
Denial is a stage of grief, its never easy losing loved ones, this acrostic flows with poignant and sincere emotions! I felt this one! Congratulations on winning
Agustin Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 12:15 AM
Congrats! Thank you for sharing this. God bless you.
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