Sara Phillips Poet I do not know?

Demoralized

The guilt of a smile
The hidden scars I bare
Feeling all lost
You have nothing to compare.

A laugh seems strange
As it falls from my lips
All dusty and bizarre
Even to myself

Guilty as sin
Convicted more than once
The feeling of life
Is an unfamiliar touch

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Matt T. Love July 20, 2010 at 5:37 PM Well you got to start gettimg familar with life and what it feels like to be living. Great write I enjoyed it L.L.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 9, 2010 at 12:36 PM Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family... enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2010 at 7:24 PM "the guilt of a smile" ,,,nicely worded,enjoyed..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2010 at 5:51 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sara. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr June 8, 2010 at 5:49 AM This is a nice flowing poem. I like how the first stanza starts with the alternating rhyme. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph