Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- Demons In Chains -

The eyes with chains around the feet,
they can never see the beauty

Beyond the sounds, colors and smell
you get sucked up by the darkness

Sweep away dust and rat feces
the shadows of evil demons

The rainbow is a miracle,
next moment will never come back

Please give life back to these dark eyes
Escape from your inconstant mind

I swear: even the weeds will shine
This song will blow away with time








08.11.2018
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Kai Michael Neumann December 2, 2018 at 12:42 AM Even the weeds will shine. They do indeed and that is the truth of most sadness. Kind wishes, Kai Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2018 at 11:30 AM - I am grateful for your comment and visit, Kai :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May November 12, 2018 at 6:57 AM A song to conquer darkness with its light...Nicely penned Anne..GL in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 7:21 AM - I am grateful for your comment and visit, Joseph - Many thanks :) - Not for contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2018 at 12:55 AM Excellent and well crafted dark poem. Enjoyed reading it. Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:57 AM - Many thanks Ravi, for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso November 12, 2018 at 12:12 AM Oh Anne, you should come to the dark side more often!!! :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:21 AM - I am grateful for your comment and visit - many thanks, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman November 10, 2018 at 3:35 PM Wow, excellent poetry, love your dark side. Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:20 AM - Thank you very much, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 10, 2018 at 2:32 PM Very deep and dark Anne lise, a thought provoking piece:-) Hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:20 AM - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven November 10, 2018 at 7:52 AM Hi Anne-Lise, this is a different write that comes from your pen and it is exellent. Your words sing out in their strength. Your words sing the emotions of this man in chains. You paint such vivid images Anne-Lise. I love the content. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:19 AM - Hi Mike, I am grateful for your comment and visit - many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose November 9, 2018 at 4:46 PM Ah, when weeds begin to shine means the sunshine has worked over time. I love it . Have a wonderful weekend dear lady Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:18 AM - I am grateful for your comment and visit, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham November 9, 2018 at 12:35 PM Dark couplets' Sunshine, written. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:17 AM - Tom, many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel November 9, 2018 at 8:04 AM A deep little poem, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:17 AM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 9, 2018 at 6:01 AM Dark poem in bright poetic background dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:10 AM - Many thanks Demetrios, for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire November 9, 2018 at 5:18 AM Indeed, this is a different and thought-provoking approach for you, Sunshine. I think you really got inside the head of the man in the photo and related to his hardships. Well done, Hon! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 12:10 AM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2018 at 7:32 PM a dark one and very cretive, Ann lise. I really like this. Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2018 at 1:12 PM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 8, 2018 at 5:03 PM crafted with dark yet strong touches of power, anne... so well done!...happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2018 at 1:11 PM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sand Blown November 8, 2018 at 3:03 PM casting gargoyles...that is age old Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2018 at 3:52 PM - A stone statue of a naughty creature, used mainly at ancient churches for directing water from the roof ... that is age old - Thank you very much ... - // Anne-Lise

Vijay Pandit November 8, 2018 at 1:21 PM Even the weeds will shine-- well said Anne-Lise. The message of your poem is deep. Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2018 at 1:31 PM - I really appreciate your comment, Vijay ... many thanks, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green November 8, 2018 at 11:25 AM This was really nice my friend, dark and creepy but nice. Best of luck in the contest. Chris Green November 8, 2018 at 11:46 AM Trust me my friend, I know exactly what you mean. Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2018 at 11:45 AM - Thank you very much Chris, I hope you know how important you are to me and my poems :) - Without comment ... my poems would die - hugs // Anne-Lise :)