Demonic Soul

Her eyes of black stare
through me,
Making me feel so angry,
Like i want to stab something,
to feel the pierce of the blade
sink through skin,
While blood flows deon my hand,
To feel that joy of killing,
taking another's life,
what is coming over me,
i don't know, but i can feel,
past the numbness she lies there inside,
waiting for me to do her work,
but how long will i be able to sustain myself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 12:51 PM
wow powerful write here again thank you duncan
Bagnall Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 6:23 AM
pleasantly unpleasant ! interesting read, if a little scary, there's a couple of typo's you might want to fix :)
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