Demolition By Soft Touches

The bastioned confidence of quarried pride Conceived no ingress save by iron decree; Yet vesper-dew, where noiseless graces bide, Tutored the adamant to clemency, Till lichened liturgies, by increments unseen, Unthroned the obdurate from its sovereign mien. The littoral catechised the granite's bone, Not with assault, but sacramental wear; Each undeciphered ripple, one by one, Absolved the precipice of all its air, As though the meekest ordinance of tide Could loose what catapults had never tried. Thereafter—vision trespassed into sense: A child, ungarlanded by name or throne, Inclined his silence with such innocence That altitudes remembered they were sown; The mountain, recollecting elder birth, Relinquished all pre-eminence to earth. Then every fortress, founded upon weight, Began to expatriate its ancient claim; The stars themselves postponed their sovereign state, As though eternity had altered name; And what no conflagration could dissever, One feather of the Infinite undid for ever.
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August 4, 2026 at 6:49 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Mohit👍 This is a masterfully crafted piece with great imagery and metaphor. Very well done!
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August 4, 2026 at 7:47 AM
Dear Edward, Your generous congratulations and kind appraisal mean a great deal to me. I am deeply grateful that you found the poem worthy of your esteem. Your encouragement is both an honour and a lasting incentive to continue seeking greater truth through the craft. In quiet light, Mohit Mitra
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August 4, 2026 at 6:17 AM
Dear Mohit, this brilliant poem explores humility, metamorphosis, and the ability of gentle energies to improve the world. The story begins with a fortress-like pride that looks invincible, but dew and lichen progressively weaken it. The metaphor of nature's gentle erosion shows that perseverance and subtlety may break down even the strongest fortifications. The poem describes how the sea's gentle waves erode the granite cliffs. This implies that patience and tenacity may conquer even the greatest challenges. It also depicts the shift as nearly mystical, implying that genuine power comes from letting go. In the poem's last vision, stars and fortifications surrender their power. A single feather from the Infinite represents a little yet strong effect that may change eternity. Congrats on your contest win
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August 4, 2026 at 7:49 AM
Dear Sotto, I am profoundly indebted to you for the rare discernment and generosity of your reading. You apprehended not merely the poem's imagery, but the inward architecture from which it arose—an act of criticism every poet quietly hopes for yet seldom receives. It is deeply humbling to know that the poem found so perceptive and gracious a companion in your mind. Your encouragement is a gift I shall remember with enduring gratitude. Ever towards the light, Mohit Mitra
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