Dementia

Parts missing; untangling ethereal strands. - - - - - - - (C) John C Michaels, 27 August 2017
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Ashley Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Such a powerful yet delicately stated, intriguing and compelling write John. Absolutely astute and beautifully expressed. Your write sparkles on a sad subject. Fantastic poetry..
Callus Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 9:21 AM
Short, but very thought provoking. Dementia is more common than I ever cared to admit, and it's something that I fear in old age! // paul
Michaels Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 7:09 AM
Agreed, as age creeps up me, worries for this and other degenerative diseases concern me more and more. Thanks for your comments, Paul. Regards, John.
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:36 PM
this is very interesting. It's thought provoking! Great way to portray this sad illness.
Michaels Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 7:09 AM
Thanks, Andrea - was just trying to encapsulate the tragedy as succinctly as possible. Regards, John.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 1:07 PM
A very sad ending to life. Pray for them. Abrupt and meaningful write.
Michaels Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Certainly not the end I would wish for :( Thank you for your comments! Regards, John.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:15 AM
- Excellent - A terrible disease, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:51 PM
Agreed, so tragic to lose the very core of what makes you, *you*. So, so sad! Regards, John.
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