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Dementia

When i look at you my whole body responds all my love pours out and makes you all the better but your beauty creates doubt and it eats away at me Causing me to to wonder if my love is returned but my love is a wretched thing making all this pain beautiful So use me how you will but please allow me to love you for you are all i have left and my dementia will not release me please dig into me and make the waves of pleasure come

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Date: 10/9/2015 6:47:00 PM
as a woman, this sounds like a "fatal attraction" poem, Joseph. It almost sounds like it was written by a lovesick highschool boy. A lot of cliches dampen the emotional impact again. Where is the punctuation? I know know if the last word is an intended pun lol? Sorry again, must be truthful, Joe. T
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