Demented Man

Vacant bloodshot eyes
Stare at one spot on the wall
Feeding tubes and scrubs

I should let him die
Mercy killers dropped the ball
So I pull the plug
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 10, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Yoni. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 15, 2010 at 11:47 AM
YONI, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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October 15, 2010 at 9:47 AM
GOOD MORNING! YONI, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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October 14, 2010 at 10:12 AM
chilling and beautiful, i loved this. congratulations on your feature! --Madison
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October 13, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Powerful poem. It is a moral dilemma modern medicine faces on a regular basis. Congratulations on being featured. Wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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October 13, 2010 at 12:57 PM
YONI, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d. "
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October 13, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Congrats Yoni on your poem "Demented Man" being featured. Vince
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October 12, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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October 11, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Yoni what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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October 10, 2010 at 3:30 PM
Congrats Yoni on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all.. with luv..
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October 10, 2010 at 12:02 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week, Rgds Janette
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August 14, 2010 at 10:34 AM
I totally agree - death with dignity. Great write, excellent message.
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July 8, 2010 at 2:05 PM
A difficult task it would have been to do but even tougher to watch a man suffer,, deep thoughts...P.D.
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April 19, 2010 at 6:45 AM
Sad plight that people get in in this modern world...I have been in a close personal situation that the family said to code non-resusitate but the NH said that she had not signed a living will to that effect so they had to do all they could to keep her living...Sara
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April 16, 2010 at 2:05 PM
What a tough decision to take...yet sometimes,, pulling the plug,,is pulling out the pain.. Heartfelt Yoni..Wish this is just a poem but it sounds real it carries so much feeling..Charma
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April 16, 2010 at 1:53 PM
This is such a powerful piece. I hope you'll be posting more poetry soon. Hope you are continuing to write. Karen
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April 16, 2010 at 9:38 AM
so very sad...for both of you. Light & Love and I have missed YOU!
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April 11, 2010 at 5:36 PM
A definite path to personal judegment in this fine Senryu Yoni. It would depend on whose plug I am pulling I suppose. Age would certainly factor in. Great poetry for thought! Aloha, Connie
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April 9, 2010 at 8:01 PM
I've been there...Great write!
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April 1, 2010 at 8:08 AM
No offense was ever taken, Yoni. Friends she feel free to share their true thoughts. I have nothing but admiration for you, but thought perhaps you were angry with me when I didn't hear from you for a while. Glad we're back on track! Love, Carolyn
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March 31, 2010 at 9:35 PM
a fine senyru
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March 31, 2010 at 3:46 PM
Kind of eerie, but i like it! andrea
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March 31, 2010 at 2:41 PM
Good afternoon Yoni, I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and I am hoping to see more of your postings and that you are going to be here more often. Love, Carol
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March 31, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Dear Yoni, as a nurse this one reaches out to me. These end of life questions are something medical personnel struggle with all the time. It's hard on families--it's hard on all that strive to make things better. Quality is better than quantity for me but not everyone feels that way, especially those that hang onto hope that a loved one will recover. This poem is powerful and handles tough choices in a thought provoking way. Well done! Karen
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March 31, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Yoni, your poem reminded me of the decision we had to make when my father was dying. Thankfully, his living will made our choice easier. I would not want to linger in such a state. Truly, letting go is more merciful. Good to see you posting again. Enjoy the beautiful spring weather. Love, Carolyn
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