Delusions

The silence engulfs me
The only sound I hear is the one in my head
Delusions beyond sanity
I listened so silently
As the yelling grew louder
Closer
More pronounced
Then I was awake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 4:28 PM
A beautiful write with a sad tone.
Smith Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 9:00 AM
VERY GOOD! I really enjoyed this
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November 6, 2009 at 9:24 AM
Wonderful verse, Tumelo, keep on writing in your own unique style ... don't know if u are new to Poetry Soup but be encouraged .. everyone here is terrific and very helpful... glad u enjoyed my Imagine poem today... try entering the contests posted by members to get a broader view of the site.. happy writing... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HGarvey Daniel Esquire.. check out his Daffy Definitions.. its fun.. come join..
Shahwan Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 9:02 AM
Pretty good poetry.
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