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Delusions

The silence engulfs me The only sound I hear is the one in my head Delusions beyond sanity I listened so silently As the yelling grew louder Closer More pronounced Then I was awake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/24/2010 4:28:00 PM
A beautiful write with a sad tone.
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Date: 1/13/2010 9:00:00 AM
VERY GOOD! I really enjoyed this
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Date: 11/6/2009 9:24:00 AM
Wonderful verse, Tumelo, keep on writing in your own unique style ... don't know if u are new to Poetry Soup but be encouraged .. everyone here is terrific and very helpful... glad u enjoyed my Imagine poem today... try entering the contests posted by members to get a broader view of the site.. happy writing... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HGarvey Daniel Esquire.. check out his Daffy Definitions.. its fun.. come join..
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Date: 10/15/2009 9:02:00 AM
Pretty good poetry.
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