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Opulent the full moon glowed Flooding light on a rocky road; Casting down his gauzy veil Luminescent to probe the pale. Misty soft the shadows went Into the secret sacrement; Where evil meets the occult tryst Of darkness dressed in amethyst Where enchantments live to cast a spell Within the fires that burn in hell. Stealthy, sly the spirits tread Through muted memories of the dead To thrust their trance without disgrace And exorcise the devil's trace. Where he leads are feet to follow Through the graves that fill the hollow Then his key unlocks the door To find that love lives nevermore Fanning life's hot fleeting fires In hearts filled with lost desires. Midnight casts its cloudy beams Smudging all the tarnished dreams Leading each by knowing hand Knowing none will understand; And all who lay in soft beds sleeping Opened eyes perplexed with weeping; Each alone with poison's pain That filled the night with tears of rain And through it all there hangs aloft The cunning moon so velvet soft.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/12/2021 12:53:00 PM
I have mailed you Elizabeth.'
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Date: 12/12/2021 12:36:00 PM
Another exquisite piece Elizabeth, pleased to make return to it.' it talks to me Of its obvious intent, also I feel other insights Murmuring to me, keep writing all blessings Joe.'
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much
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Date: 4/17/2013 10:47:00 AM
An awesome poem you have penned Lizzie. love phyl
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Date: 4/5/2013 9:31:00 PM
Really evocative, and so smooth a write here Lizzie.. They don't come better than this glowing piece; such good reading here, take care Joe..)
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Date: 3/19/2013 1:50:00 PM
Wonderful write. Thanks for dropping by. I have not written in ages...TAH
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Date: 3/19/2013 11:03:00 AM
Explosive writing, Liz. I've stolen your line "fanning life's hot fleeting fires" and stored it in my 'fave lines' file. Beautiful alliteration and so absolutely you. I hope you're doing well, sis. :)
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:50:00 AM
Captivating, breathtaking, moving, passionate, inspiring! Wow! You are amazing girl! Love your poetry. Your words of expressions are like no other! Most beautiful!
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Date: 3/8/2013 10:48:00 AM
Your poem carries to such a region where dark and light play their own game but life of some other is affected by. In the state of sorrow situational atmosphere brings something good too. Thanks for your kind visit to my write. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/7/2013 12:42:00 PM
This is a kaleidoscopic romp through some satanic maze, garden or graveyard. Anywho that is the way I see it. A dance macabre. Romantic stuff. Love it. Love Dave
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Date: 3/6/2013 3:07:00 PM
Elizabeth...please go to my latest blog 'Who is your favorite poet?' and see what Francine Roberts had to say...I could not disagree, and please soup mail me on how to get your book - Tim
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Date: 3/4/2013 12:50:00 PM
Liz, I especially LOVE the last line: The cunning moon so velvet soft" but the whole thing is so somber, serious, brooding and yet...beautiful! Just thought I'd let you know I'm writing again and checking you out as well. Looks like you haven't lost your magical Midas Touch! Hope all is well...Cheers, Terry
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Date: 3/4/2013 8:57:00 AM
Impressive !!! so sweet ...beautifully written sweetheart Elize... how are you my dear :) its quite sometime not hear from you... wishing you all the best :) hugs and luv <3 <3 <3 Sk
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Date: 3/2/2013 3:36:00 PM
A compelling and heartfelt write Liz. Hugs
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Date: 3/2/2013 3:27:00 PM
it's done.
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Date: 2/28/2013 3:11:00 PM
this is just beautiful, Lizzy. Hope you are doing well and keeping warm : )
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Date: 2/27/2013 5:04:00 PM
Lizzie - Haunting, beautiful... Terry
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Date: 2/27/2013 1:54:00 AM
An invitation is waiting especially for you.
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John Loving Iii
Date: 2/28/2013 2:38:00 PM
the last time you visited this person was 12-8-2012. I was in my dry spell.
Date: 2/26/2013 2:47:00 PM
Don't worry Lizzy, rage and anger are two of the best muses. They inspire some to fight while us to write. I have my evils also. But my secret is I know God loves me.I know it through my work because I speek for Him. I know it through April because of what was.when I read your work I know we share the same thing inside. Not inteligence but s soul. I hate collaborating but with you there is no risk. I'll make something and send it. Or if I have anything to which you'd like to add feel free
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The Situation
Date: 2/26/2013 2:55:00 PM
Few do I love and respect.I love many but for me to look up to; not many have earned it.call it praises if you will. But if you write nothing else; your place in poetry history has already been filled.
Date: 2/26/2013 12:38:00 PM
Where are you, Liz? We can't afford to lose our finest poet. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/26/2013 8:24:00 AM
Where is our darling Lizzy? We miss her so much. I'm beginning to be worried because she always shows up. We will just have to pray that she's alright.everybody keep eyes open and let us know if she's alright.
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Date: 2/23/2013 12:59:00 PM
enjoyed reading this beauty again, my friend. Hope you are having a great weekend x
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Date: 2/23/2013 4:35:00 AM
Beautiful poetry. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 2/20/2013 12:21:00 PM
soup mail
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Date: 2/17/2013 5:10:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I didn't know you are also Canadian. Which part of Canada are you from?
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