Delusion

Opulent the full moon glowed
Flooding light on a rocky road;
Casting down his gauzy veil
Luminescent to probe the pale.
Misty soft the shadows went
Into the secret sacrement;
Where evil meets the occult tryst
Of darkness dressed in amethyst
Where enchantments live to cast a spell
Within the fires that burn in hell.

Stealthy, sly the spirits tread
Through muted memories of the dead
To thrust their trance without disgrace
And exorcise the devil's trace.
Where he leads are feet to follow
Through the graves that fill the hollow
Then his key unlocks the door
To find that love lives nevermore
Fanning life's hot fleeting fires
In hearts filled with lost desires.

Midnight casts its cloudy beams
Smudging all the tarnished dreams
Leading each by knowing hand
Knowing none will understand;
And all who lay in soft beds sleeping
Opened eyes perplexed with weeping;
Each alone with poison's pain
That filled the night with tears of rain
And through it all there hangs aloft
The cunning moon so velvet soft.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Maverick Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 12:53 PM
I have mailed you Elizabeth.'
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December 12, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Another exquisite piece Elizabeth, pleased to make return to it.' it talks to me Of its obvious intent, also I feel other insights Murmuring to me, keep writing all blessings Joe.'
Makama Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much
Babcock Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 10:47 AM
An awesome poem you have penned Lizzie. love phyl
Maverick Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 9:31 PM
Really evocative, and so smooth a write here Lizzie.. They don't come better than this glowing piece; such good reading here, take care Joe..)
Hill Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Wonderful write. Thanks for dropping by. I have not written in ages...TAH
Hendricks Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 11:03 AM
Explosive writing, Liz. I've stolen your line "fanning life's hot fleeting fires" and stored it in my 'fave lines' file. Beautiful alliteration and so absolutely you. I hope you're doing well, sis. :)
Goudreau Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 10:50 AM
Captivating, breathtaking, moving, passionate, inspiring! Wow! You are amazing girl! Love your poetry. Your words of expressions are like no other! Most beautiful!
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March 8, 2013 at 10:48 AM
Your poem carries to such a region where dark and light play their own game but life of some other is affected by. In the state of sorrow situational atmosphere brings something good too. Thanks for your kind visit to my write. Loved always, bl
Austin Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 12:42 PM
This is a kaleidoscopic romp through some satanic maze, garden or graveyard. Anywho that is the way I see it. A dance macabre. Romantic stuff. Love it. Love Dave
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March 6, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Elizabeth...please go to my latest blog 'Who is your favorite poet?' and see what Francine Roberts had to say...I could not disagree, and please soup mail me on how to get your book - Tim
Martin Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Liz, I especially LOVE the last line: The cunning moon so velvet soft" but the whole thing is so somber, serious, brooding and yet...beautiful! Just thought I'd let you know I'm writing again and checking you out as well. Looks like you haven't lost your magical Midas Touch! Hope all is well...Cheers, Terry
Komala Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Impressive !!! so sweet ...beautifully written sweetheart Elize... how are you my dear :) its quite sometime not hear from you... wishing you all the best :) hugs and luv <3 <3 <3 Sk
Macfarlane Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 3:36 PM
A compelling and heartfelt write Liz. Hugs
Loving Iii Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 3:27 PM
it's done.
Horne Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 3:11 PM
this is just beautiful, Lizzy. Hope you are doing well and keeping warm : )
O'Leary Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Lizzie - Haunting, beautiful... Terry
Loving Iii Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:54 AM
An invitation is waiting especially for you.
Loving Iii Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 2:38 PM
the last time you visited this person was 12-8-2012. I was in my dry spell.
Situation Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Don't worry Lizzy, rage and anger are two of the best muses. They inspire some to fight while us to write. I have my evils also. But my secret is I know God loves me.I know it through my work because I speek for Him. I know it through April because of what was.when I read your work I know we share the same thing inside. Not inteligence but s soul. I hate collaborating but with you there is no risk. I'll make something and send it. Or if I have anything to which you'd like to add feel free
Situation Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 2:55 PM
Few do I love and respect.I love many but for me to look up to; not many have earned it.call it praises if you will. But if you write nothing else; your place in poetry history has already been filled.
Austin Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 12:38 PM
Where are you, Liz? We can't afford to lose our finest poet. Love, Dave
Situation Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Where is our darling Lizzy? We miss her so much. I'm beginning to be worried because she always shows up. We will just have to pray that she's alright.everybody keep eyes open and let us know if she's alright.
Horne Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 12:59 PM
enjoyed reading this beauty again, my friend. Hope you are having a great weekend x
Sathasivam Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 4:35 AM
Beautiful poetry. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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February 20, 2013 at 12:21 PM
soup mail
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February 17, 2013 at 5:10 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I didn't know you are also Canadian. Which part of Canada are you from?
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